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TMNT FIC

The turtle brothers are on a mission to bring down a Krang base, only their mission becomes one of rescue as they find something unexpected during their raid.

This fanfic was made for my fun and amusement, I would love to hear comments and ideas from whoever is willing to read it. It's my first fic so I hope someone out there likes it a bit.

Btw, I do not own any rights to TMNT, just wanted to clarify..... ENJOY! ;*

Huge Thanks to the awesomest prplbeedoo who helped me out tons by offering to be a hero ninja beta reader for my fic!!! Thanks for all the help u gave this humble ESL!! It is greatly appreciated! 

chapter 2 fav.me/d9hp74t
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I like a lot of what I'm seeing so far, but you really need a title.  Your title is your hook, what draws people to look at your fic.  You've also got a few fragmented sentences... I could go through and point then out, if you like.